KingIsaac arise

KISC NEWS REPORT

KingIsaac, wearing his Royal dress, sat on his throne. After the introduction made by the Ministers, the King stand and said "The Royal nation of KingIsaac is moving forward from good nation to great nation. We will do everything, even if it takes war, to expand our territory and to be richer...."

After his speech, the King immediately ordered that the police and military units of KingIsaac to prepare for the possible war. The Royal Guard surrounded the King with heavy weapons and tanks were deployed to the palace.

The media were sent out of the palace after the King left.

(OOC: Is there are grammar mistakes on my report?)

(OOC: There is are indeed some grammar mistakes no big deal though, we know what you're saying.)

(OOC: what are the mistakes? I want to know it so that I can avoid using them again)

(OOC: The only specific thing would be where you used 'stand', when you should have used 'stood'. Also, 'Is there are' isn't correct, it should be 'there are' or 'is there'. A little confusing, I know, English has very relaxed grammar and more exceptions to the rule then there are rules.

Apart from that, some of the phrasing in your post was a little vague, such as preparing for 'the possible war'. There isn't anything specifically wrong with that statement, but I think what you wanted to say was something more along the lines of 'any possible war' or 'the possibility of war', because otherwise it sounds like you already plan to declare war on someone specific or expect someone specific to declare war on you.

The sentence 'The Royal Guard surrounded the King with heavy weapons and tanks were deployed to the palace' is also kind of awkward, although you probably just need to add a comma after 'tanks' and it would be fine.

Hope that helped!)

(OOC: Thank you! It really helps! Sometimes, using 4 languages at a time makes me forget past tense words. Thank you!)

[OOC- KingIsaac, the EEE must know your nation's stance on religion and the dominant religious beliefs of your nation in order to establish how we will act towards your monarchy.]

EEE's ambassador to King Issac entered the throne room and reverently bowed, "Greetings, magnificent King Isaac. As you know, the Holy Empire of Edo Edi Essum shares a long border with your glorious nation. We hope to peacefully coexist with the Royal Nation of KingIsaac. War should be avoided."

[OOC- Furthermore, should you choose to pursue war with either myself and Serliaq, you will fight both of us. We are allies.]